The story blog was http://blendedwith-fantasy.blogspot.com/. dont bother to go cus i privated it. And even if I don't, it sucks like what the hell. I'm freaking serious and not in the mood for negotiating. Anyway...
Rae struggled not to cry. He was just a little boy. And his mother was gone just like that. He glanced at the dead body of his mother placed in an old coffin. She was so beautiful. So pale. His father placed roses into the coffin. White roses. Suddenly, he felt very faint and everything around him was a blur. His head hurts.
"Rae!" his father's voice rang around his head.
This is an extract from 'Darkness & Lightning' written around... a year ago, I think. I decided to cancel all my stories cus they suck... This is about a do-or-die cat-and-mouse chase between Rae and a mysterious girl. I mean, how do you say... I DID make a video of it but then I deleted it cus no one viewed, which is sad. *sigh*
Anyway, I'm gunna modify the paragraph a bit...
The air was melancholy. Rae and his father stood in the heartless rain.
He was just a little boy and his mother was gone, just like that. He glanced at the lifeless, motionless body of his mother placed in an old, wooden coffin. Yet she was so beautiful, so pale...
Warm tears flowed out of his cheeks and he quickly rubbed his small, delicate coal black eyes already wet with sadness. He didn't want to cry in front of his already devastated father, but it was inevitable. Everything was unexpected.
His father, with a solemn face that depicts a man's pride of trying his hardest not to cry, placed roses into the coffin. White, lovely roses. Perfect for a lovely mother like her.
Suddenly, the world spinned around and everything around him was a blur. He felt his head splitting as he let out an ear piercing scream...
And in not more than a second had he lay on the cold, wet muddy soil.
"RAE!!!" he could hear a man's voice... A warm and worried voice... In this sorrowed darkness and cold silence. It reassured him a little.
Yeah, yeah, its more... kae po lah. it has a lot more words and I described the crap a bit more... So readers can understand more and bla bla bla. Won't go to this kind of crap details.
But honestly, I think this was what actually made my results decrease. Yeah. Cus I'm more kae po and wrote too long. and so I hate compositions and hope they die.
Lol, all of a sudden I prefer letter writing to compo writing... YAY LETTER WRITING???
But well, anyway, i shall go more on the details of my beloved Darkness & Lightning.
Readers, I'm sure you've read a post in my blog regarding Darkness&Lightning, which is a comic book right? The truth is, the written story is actually the original one. Which means, Darkness and Lightning was originally written in blendedwith-fantasy@bs.com, with the story of Rae and the... girl.
Okay, I hope you won't get too confusing... sigh, Ctrl Click HERE to go to the post I was talking about.
The original Darkness & Lightning was about a predator&prey chase between immortals. But, after that I decided to COMPLETELY ABANDON the story. Then, I decided to make a NEW comic, but I couldn't think of a title. And so, since the original D&L was abandoned, I used that title for my comic.
get it? Sigh, read again if you don't get it... Anyway, I think I should change the title of the written version now...
hmm... Lemme think of one...
Outrun...?
OH, SOUNDS LIKE A GOOD TITLE. *_*
OKAY THEN, WILL USE THIS TITLE. ... .________________.
I think I'll rewrite the title and story, and MAYBE write the story in THIS blog, or on a different blog. What'dya think?
Enough of stories... Since I'm freaking bored and the title in this post is "2 year old memories...", I decided to... *tries not to die* showcase... ergh *difficult to speak* my... old drawings... *asthma attack*
... *dies due to the overpressure of the ugliness of Ted's old drawings, so Ted can't showcase to viewers*
*reappears as a spirit*
Well! My drawings were shown in this blog, in different posts, just find them! or... something.
... Now's not the time, everyone.... Now's not the time............. cus i died.
I think I'll post a quiz... Ohmygod I posted too many posts....
